It's too dark in most of the tag. I like the idea of making it glow, but it just didn't go through well. The BG is very bland IMO an dthe focal...
For how simple it is, It's very appealing. Since you were going for a simple idea, I'd add a bit of blue smudging on the bottom. IMO that'd just...
v3 is the best IMO. One thing I don't like is the pattern. It's too repetitive. Also, the lighting on the focal is a bit messed up. BG is a...
Like the colors and also love what you did with the sprite. If I were you, I'd maybe add some text into the right side (I would clipping mask...
For a first, it's actually pretty good. One thing I hate (not anything against you) is when ppl cover the whole tag with the focal. It honestly...
Yeah, I noticed that a lot of my tags don't really have flow a lot of the time. Been trying to work on that. I also think the last one is a bit...
Wow, I really like this one. So simple, yet very appealing. V2 ftw. I'd change the positoning of the text, distracts from the focal a bit. I...
V1 is much better IMO. Very monotone though. Effects look good, and I like what you were able to do with the text. The negative space on the...
Waay too bright, as nan said b4. Also, don't like the effects done on the BG around the Focal. Distracts from the Focal, and the Focal should...
IMO, V1 is better. Don't like the vector type style of V2. Left side of V2 seems to just go from effects to smudging. Nothing to really bridge...
New Tag, pretty good? [img]
The bottom left of the tag is actually a very good improvement. Not many effects going on other than that. Bg is bland, and the render is too...
Very bland BG. Much too bright IMO. Focal on the left is too dark, can't distinguish any features on it. Text is decent, not best I've seen....
The idea behind it was he was running from something (The pink cloud, poison maybe?) Couldn't really find a way to make it fade into it. Another...
Bump!!!
My eyes! They burn! I thought I was gonna go blind for a second. Waaay too light (what I was hinting at b4). Also very monotone and could use...
Work on putting more effects on the right side, just seems very empty. The focal is very hard to pick out from all of the other clitter clutter...
Colors are really messed up. I can see your kinda a newbie so I'll go easy. The text is pretty bad as well. Try adding some effects, just looks...
Just made this using resources from a tutorial I found on the site. Also used some effects used by said tutorial. Here it is. V1 [img] V2 [img]
The focal is actually too blended. The added texture to the focal makes it unappealing. It's pretty bland. Could have done without the...
Everyone has their own style. I'm glad you've found yours. Btw, V2 is better =P
The right side is very bland, also, it's hard to tell what exactly the focal is. I would have worked on distinguishing it more. Good work on the...
TBH, the bg is kinda bland. Also, the lightning (although I know it goes with the render) does not go with the tag AT ALL. Text could be better,...
What's to be sorry about? I know, I need to work on coloring more. Ur the only one who actually sees that in my tags as I do. Also, I do need...
Whah??? Wtf is it? Anyways, waaaaaay too bright IMO. Could use more effects on he outsides. Also, there is no Focal...? Text is pretty badly...
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