Ok, I tried altering the flow too. [img] Better?
Thanks troll :)
[img] Still trying to develop my technique. Comments/suggestions appreciated :)
Here's two more versions [img] - burn [img] - clipping mask
Great concept man, love it. Text normally draws the eye to the focal and having it in both places makes it distracting. But I love the pentooling...
Ok thanks here's V2: [img]
Ok thanks guys ^^ In v1 I used topaz twice and in v2/v3 I used it once. But still, it was too much :P
Thanks for the great criticism.
True, but mind commenting on the tag at least? :P
[img] This was a gift. What do you think?
[img] What do you think? [img] - V2 [img] - burn [img] - clipping mask
Ok thanks guys :) Here's v3 with no text: [img]
[img] Hi guys. I've just been experimenting with a few techniques. What do you think? Suggestions to improve are much appreciated :) [img] - v2...
I'm really feeling that tag. I love the colour scheme, expecially the interpretation you got from the render. If I were to change anything, I...
Yeah, that looks really cool. It'd be good if you posted the original stock to see what changes were made ^^
Ok, thanks. Any suggestions to help improve it? :)
I like all the views on the topic n' all but CnC is highly appreciated. ^^
Yeah I can see what you're trying to do. The render is pretty big though. Follow Fluxens advice, smudge the render into the background a bit....
[img] Still trying to find my style guys.. Constructive criticism please :)
I think that if the line was ditched it would be more empty. Same goes for the text. If you maybe wanted to change it about, experiment with some...
Guys are you just looking for excuses to criticize? Who care's about the god damn text, it's blended in on purpose. I personally prefer the black...
I really like that. I don't understand what you mean Sunny when you say he's leaving too much empty space. Personally I think it looks great, I...
Thats pretty nice. I really like the background. What program are you using? I would just suggest blending the render in a little by smudging it...
Why don't you like it? I think it's really effective. I like the use of the blues and reds. The light may be a little contrasted but I think that...
I love the effect you're trying to create with the render and the stock - as if he's fighting in a war or something. =P I also love the...
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