It's ok. But seriously Your wording is all wrong. We want them to hate us, not love us...wait...shuttup. Anyways,what's with "ultimate" we aren't...
1st one:Text is,like, REALLY hard to read 7/10 2nd one:That glare on his face, kind of distracting 8/10
What is it? there's a statue-sorta-thingy in the back ground, and I have no idea what the multicolor thing is, and what is the random brick of...
Good lighting effect. Nice fire effects. the brushing is a little choppy on the right, it wasnt blended well. 7/10
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