too much haze and it looks imbalanced also, try a more interesting color combination and some more brilliant effects
first one needs better colors and a more interesting composition . . . there's really nothing to look at second one has too much contrast and...
typo refers to text :P
take out that typo and ditch the topaz, bro colors in first are best but it could use some strong yellows to make it pop
the vexel looks decent but the tag looks cheesey overall . . .
that's not bad left side really lets it down because it looks hasty and unplanned . . . try to avoid translucent effects until it's evident that...
needs more depth and better color combinations the random red on top doesn't suit well . . .
looks more like a distortion filter than smuding you need to get more creative with your composition . . . a simple > . < focal isn't too appealing
haven't been here since august 07 . . . just seeing what's up with the scene
just here to see what this forum is all about . . . found out about it through 'X.ed
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