They seem to be over contrasted. Try not to force text into a tag btw, it makes it look even more sloppy when you cram text into it.
The render placement in this is rather... 'erm, dumb, imo. Overall, the tag looks to be a little random. Try not to have such a variety in the...
i feel that the depth may be a little too dramatized, if you know what I mean. :O
just try'na get back into the game. [img] [img] and also [img] (i was told the first two were too bland, so I added random nonsense)
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