it seems too cluttered, bad depth.
ew, the filters are all dominant.
too empty, too dark, and too many C4D's. try some other things for effects
i like the cold effect on the second one.
v1 and v4 are awesome, I don't like the other two for some reason.
feels kinda empty and lacking
1st > 2nd
Both look like WIP's, not just second one.
too many C4Ds. bad color maintenance. too much depth.
holy hell that's awesome.
Pen lines are meh, and other than that it just looks like C4D spots. Coloring is eh as well.
Also, David Villa is better.
Both are pretty dull. Too big. Needs better lighting.
v2. effects are strange though.
How is a 175px soft-edge round brush random? And how is it arbitrary if that's where the light source is coming from?
Couldn't really work with colors on this one, so they're kinda monotone.
If that's a clipping mask on his cheek (or anything not from the stock), get rid of it. It looks weird. Very good though.
2nd set > 1st set
yeah, sharpen effects around render, blur others, add some burnt edges.
otherwise i absolutely love it.
render parts of background need blurred more. great colors, great composition.
do you know what image size is? it's a cool tool that makes it so you don't have to have huge sigs and overly superfluous effects. =\
unbalanced; left is lacking.
lighting seems weird, and shadows seem overburned.
good effects though
That is awesome.
eww, get rid of the lense flare. Also it seems a little too sharp, especially on the stock/render edges. otherwise, good.
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