i just had to share this with the GR community. this was posted on the NeoGAF forums and a few entries have been submitted already.
too much smudging
the bg totally does not suit the render.
focal ponits have rubbed out!!!!! also bg's are plain. also both sigs lack flow
plain sig. text needs to simpler
dont cover the render with effects. plus the text is out of place and not really needed, maybe put it somehwere else.
Definetly change the sprite, to someone more "happy" and "peppy". maybe that annoying twat Sean.
P.s. Q is rubbish
rub out the effects on the middle of the render, sharpen the render. and add some curves/levels.
they is just kinda plain. like all of em and the first one is just kinda messy. but the last one has potential. maybe use the same colours as the...
the focal needs a "glowy" effect. and its kinda plain, not much going on in bg
put abit more depth. and maybe make only the tiger orange, might look good.
covered the render waay too much. try and arange that effect around the render (like your other sig :D). after that, the sig will look really...
pretty messy, no real flow.
for some reason they both look kinda unfinished.
maximum pc has actually done an article of building the a gaming pc that can play crysis at 40fps for $500!!!!!!...
maybe update the drivers?
nice and clean sig. just stick to the simple texts, it would look alot better. also this is just me but i would make it alot skinnier coz the...
very cool sig, its just the flash of yellow in teh middle looks wierd.
stick to one render, looks very cluttered. stick to a colour scheme, rather than randomley using different coloured c4d. read up some tuts, learn...
lol that text was used in another sig u done. plus can u make a tut coz i really wanna make of those sigs.
looks very messy, cant really make out whats going on. propably due to size, plus the right size dosent really go with the flow of render and is...
the left side of the trooper is kinda plain.
well it looks good to me. alothugh the legs are are really dark and look out of place
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nice sig, avoid smudging the focal point, would look alot better if wasnt. and the light source is abit too big.
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