Text high-jacks the flow, focal, and ruins the lighting, and even the composition. The girl doesn't stand out enough either, and the background is...
What's up with the stock? All stretched out? Everything is low quality, and the effects don't work because of that. You should try to read some...
The white dots ruin the flow, plus they are wayy to big. I love the red lines, but they still don't help create any flow. The Clan tag text is...
Love the colors on both. The Fx behind the kid in the first one rock, not a fan of the render though. They could both use some more detial, more...
By the way, it's kinda irrelevant, but Nero is the new ----. :P
Text ruins it. Lighting is too strong and too clean-white. The effects are sick, but the canvas size of the tag ruins the overal visual interest....
The render is blended too hard. At first I didn't know what it was till I looked closer. The right side's colors look very low quality, and the...
v1 still better. You hid the Ludacris text too much now. For the left side, I would've had both the squares and the effects. You don't need such a...
Lighting could use some work. I woulda added a bit of orange tint to Raziel to add the effect of the orange sky-light. Black effects could use a...
Good visual interest, no WOW factor, but definately an okay tag. I love the right side of Luda, but the left is lacking, nd the squares completely...
^ Word boois, lol.. Why do you like mine so much Morti? I thought it was realistic, but it feels a bit empty. Thanks for the comment though, +2...
I knew it Kennedy. :) Grats nublings, very nice from all 3. Definately top 3 material, I just despise Pulse for not trying to do text, when I...
I'm a british cigarette.
I'm a fag? :( :(
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The AT-AT doesn't really look like it is there. It's a sick idea, and definately awesome, but it's lacking a bit of realism and scale. I think the...
The creature looks really low quality, eughh, I love the concept feel, definately a good job regardless.
My one uncle is a Police Officer and my cousin was a senior last year. We got our one uncle to arrest the girl and put her in the back of his...
I'm not gonna lie. It'll probably be a waste of time.
I had a dream where I was elite. It ended with "click bang." :(
I've got a Motorola RAZR v3t. Hoping to get a new one soon, but might just wait for the new Ericson Concept to come out.
Kennedy do you want to make some babies? :o i LOVE IT! If you look at my first like 10 created topics ever, I rendered that render. Not yours,...
It has depth? I think the effects are really bland, and a tad boring. The huge bubble things don't keep any flow going and the positioning is...
Bump before bed? :o
Kind of boring. Doesn't show much. Looks like a giant render / stock with some better lighting. No extra effects, no text, hmmm? :( The right...
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