It all seems like C4D's, nothing's wrong with C4D's, it's just thee best when there used to create an environment or effect, where as thos just...
Your other work is amazing, this doesn't look bad, but it's way to crowded and messy, cool effects though, just tone em down.
I actually really like it, it's very simple, everything fits, good job.
The text at the side looks pretty good, but nothing really stciks out, keep trying :)
Not to be rude, it just looks kinda icky, so many colors all kinda crammed in there with odd bits here and there, I can tell you tried a bunch of...
I liked the effects you have with the text, number one just seems a bit too plain, apart from the render theres not much to look at. Number two...
Really monotone, try mixing up the colors, and the atmosphere, nice little effect though on wolverine at the top.
The left and right side are too sharp, the sig lacks depth.
Number two looks the best, number one has a lot of color clash and four seems slightly messy.
Ahah yeah, I put a line in the sig originally and created a clipping max, the line din look good so I removed it, but i forgot about that part....
[img] Please Comment, how can I improve?
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