I like the idea a lot, but it seems too contrasted, maybe a curve on it see how it comes out?
Great blending in the text.
Looks like a blurred screenshot?
Text fits the sig just fine. Maybe a little fade on it.
I think it needs the eyes.
Dark fits the render better.
While I don't think it's a good sig...I think it's a great work for a wallpaper...larger though.
Nice smudging, though I think it should have been left to the one side for balance.
Color the background I think to offset the render.
The sig doesn't fit the render in my opinion.
A curve might help the brightness without drowning out colors.
Definately different.
I like it, clean and simple. Raise the text just a tad though I think.
I don't agree with the "dont self teach"... However you'll learn a lot looking at tutorials.
Text effect it great, but font doesn't fit.
Everything blends well, my only suggestion would be off center it a bit.
I think it would look better colored.
They look under contrasted...loses depth.
Do not center things...renders or text. Placing something dead in a corner is centering it in that corner and it causes focus to shift off of the sig.
I like the style, but your current is better in my opinion.
Version 2 ftw
I think the blending is great on the C4D, the text though needs to go or be redone.
The first one shows the best use of layers.
Add to the background, even if you just brush in/burn tool for more depth.
I like it, the render could use some more blending though.
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