The first and the third look amazing. On the 3rd one, just work a bit more with teh color of the text, otherwise, it looks amazing.
Yeah, the left side is also a completely different style as well. Doesn't look good at all there D:
This. But it really isn't finished though, looking good for a WIP.
The white soft brush needs blending into the image. Lighting, depth, as well as the focal needs work. Effects look cool.
I can't see v2, but it looks like it needs a bit more color D:. Looks good otherwise.
Rights side looks nice, there is a bit too much attention on the left side. Left side also looks a bit weird :\
Well, they're both on power points, however, it's mainly that the background stands out too much.
Yes, this tag is a great work, especially V2 where you fix the oversmudging problem. Only advise is that it looks a bit strange on the right side...
Yeah, I would say blur the background a bit, and create some depth. It looks amazing for a manip though.
Wow that looks great, only thing I see that looks kinda weird are the glasses, I love the style.
Especially the right side of the sword looks weird, even though the right side is white, the transition looks weird at least, also on the very...
[img] Stock - http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/6149/sa...29fb98f0ds4.jpg I pretty much tried adding a very dynamic lighting source to change...
[img] C&C
kk I'll work on it when I get home. psd files ftw! Thank you very much for the help.
[img] C&C Original stock is http://img139.imageshack.us/img139/6566/foxrenderkneers1.png primarily working on lighting the render to fit with...
Last bump on this, and if no replies, I'm remaking the topic -_-
I would like comments on the 2nd version. I really don't want to have to make another topic for it D:.
I personally like the blue version the best. I dunno why, just seems really nice.
I put an update to it on my first post. Version 2 is up. I tried filling the gap and changed the light tones.
I really can't tell what it's supposed to be really. If it's just an abstract, it looks interesting. Though I agree with the text. WTF? It's just...
Yeah, the background needs work, blur to put more focus on the render.
wow, it's amazing. The text is perfect and it's just overall amazing. There's nothing I can say you can improve on D:. Amazing job.
It's actual text. I included some smudging and layer masks to fix opacity problems.
bump. I would like more advice as well.
Well, I have the PSD, I'll try to fill the left side a bit more, probably blur it a bit more and try to bring out the render. I suck at text, but...
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