No one else?
Okay I will work on that. ;D How can I know which colors fit good? Any tips? :D
It really looks that you took up a render and put a texture below it.. Your current one is faaar better. I do not really like that one at all...
So guys... ;D What do you think about that one...? [img]
I like the colors but the effects are a bit too strong, it could need more depth / detail. The background is off <.<
Too messy!!!
I am not really a fan of multiple focals, do you have a version without the b/w one at the left side? I like v1 more but in my opinion the text...
Agreed. There is nothing really going on and it is way too misty, get rid of it and add some more c4ds. (Re)move the text and strengthen the contrast.
Yea, work on your flow. This one could need some more adjustement layers.
Without right side + white border. Awesome. :D
First: Too bright at some parts although the flow is nice, there is no real focal point. Second: The focal is too hard to locate. The contrast is...
The first one is too monotone, the left and the right side are nearly the same. The second one is better. ;)
One question, is that supposed as a signature? Because then it would be really big. Anyways the render looks really choppy.
Good for a try. (Re)move the text. Make the c4ds opacity may a bit lower. Increase the lighting. Lower down the brightness of the render. Remove...
I pretty like it, too. You could improve the lighting a bit.
The light source seems like just put in with a white brush so that no one says it is not there. Work on your lighting...
Some more depth would be nice but I like the actual outcome. The lighting is at some parts a bit strange.
The canvas is a bit too small and I would remove the text. Burn a bit more. I pretty like it, nice work.
I do not really like the negative colors, got the original ones. The left side is too empty, there could be some more flow and the text is...
Well he said nearly all. Just look over in the tut section or grab old psds, it might help you getting on. 2 years is a long time, anyways your...
I do not really like the red dots and the bg is a bit too sharp at some parts.
Bumporz
And learn to work with C4D renders. ;)
Nice work. You really did a well job on some. ;)
Nice for the first one. The colors are fitting. ;) Well you need to improve your flow and get starting to work well with depth and lighting. Good...
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