V1 ftw, try blending him in a bt more
look up some tuts, it just looks like you pasted the render on the bg, and it requires a lot more fx
made this for a SOTW on another forum [img] CnC please, btw the theme was text as focal
try to improve on your blending
not really liking this one from you because there seems to be two flow, one on the left and one on the right, they are conteradicting each other...
smudge the left side properly because you can see where you have duplicated his face i suggest checking out some tuts
its quite nice although the lighting needs some major work
try following some tutorials on how to use c4d's properly and how to blend properly because those are the two things that are wrong with this
im thinking of making a tut for it cos i like the outcome [img] CnC please guys
dont ever change the blending mode of your focals, leave it on normal
thanks for commenting guys
the left is really bright and its also quite monotone, change the text
are those lines on the right pentool? cos they look uber sexy hawt sig dude, just try and blend him in a bit more
this is quite nice, sharpen the focal and add some 1-3 pixel dots with an outer glow randomly around the focal
thanks dude
thanks a lot guys, ill improve then make a tut for it so keep an eye out anymore comments?
just finished this [img] sorry about the strange size, i realised the canvas was too big so i resized right at the end lol CnC please
nah mate the darkness is what gives this sig all its feeling, i suggest improving the text
welcome, dont worry this is a great site hope you learn a lot in your time here
the render is like that, nothing i could do apart from trying to sharpen but thanks for the comment
the entire bg looks smudged, but if its filters then its probably the clouds filter?
ive been doing it for less than six months also, mine are not actually that bad now, im getting some decent comments
------ing sexy, can i have it? lol id love to check out the psd to see how you made it please some other really nice pieces in here
i think you need some new smudge settings, ill PM you some later on
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