remove the lower left clipping masks and line effects on the bottom right. they dont quite blend in. also work on making your lighting more realistic.
needs some more coloring tweaks added, and avoid putting text in corners.
the lighting is screwed up, it belongs on the other side.
if your gonna have color in it might as well have the whole thing colored
made this one last night [img] [img] really like draven's fable render pack btw :)
the bg's overblurred and the effects could use more work.
the render doesnt blend, you can see a white line around it. try zooming in and deleting it or adding effects in the foreground.
v1 if you clean up the effects on the bottom right and add some more adjust layers for coloring.
really monotone, lighting is great other wise and depth is pretty good.
its nice cept the font for the text doesnt quite fit in.
try some more tuts, avoid placing text in the corner and try to work with vibrant colors.
its too bright and the effects need more definition.
it looks great, just needs some kind of wow factor to make it its own individual kind of tag.
the first one is too plain and the effects are too light, its difficult to really see your effects. 2nd one is better although he seems a bit...
looks great, imo theres a little bit too much red in the center of the lp.
nanSTA pretty much covered everything that was needed to be said.
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old skool super nintendo ftw.
colors and lighting are my only complaint, gj otherwise
^ - agree
delete some of the effects covering his face
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v1 is better imo. your focal needs to stand out mroe as i could not tell what i was looking at in its first glance. effects need to be more well...
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