stock looks lq, smudging and erasing is nice but it looks a bit plain.
lighting and effect composition need work mostly.
bit plain and bright, has some coloring issues. add more solid effects and work on your bgs.
1st one but its too chaotic and compo needs work.
do some more tuts mostly on blending, effects, etc.
monotone and you should work on your bgs and text.
dont know whats going on in the sig.
the typography theme you have going on doesnt go with the c4d bg.
render is over crowded with effects, and compo needs imrprovement.
try working wiht a bigger canvas, here it needs some more contrast and the text doesnt fit. your effects could use some work considering you have...
render u chose looks lq, lighting cud use work.
i suggest working on your coloring as they always seem to come out in the same colors.
try some tuts on blending and bgs, text looks last minute.
v1, work on some of the sharpness issues on her face and hands
some places are too sharp, blur and burn the back of the train to enhance depth. lighting is on the wrong side.
3,5, and 6 have the best composition imo. you just need to work on coloring and cleaning up some of the effects on the last one.
composition text and lighting needs most improvement here, i'd say v2 if you fix these and sharpened up the guy a bit.
its too plain imo, needs some kind of focal that we can put our attention on.
defo v3, its easier to see what you actually did but the colors and execution could have been better
the renders looks strange for some odd reason other then that its nice overall.
idk if i should be Cncing this since it was made for me but... you should add a reduce noise layer to get rid of some of the low quality spots....
bring out the logo more and closer to the render. lighting here is really weird and mario could use some sharpening.
the colors of his face and behind him should be a bit more vibrant.
lighting still need work and make the render stick out more from the tag. needs some more variety of coloring or reds and yellows.
the render doesnt blend in with the tag, also try to make more advanced bgs.
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