Yea, looks a bit messy, but I still like it. A bw version would may be even better.
Well, to say it simple, it has noe foreground. :D Try to sharpen the render and do not blur the background too much. In that tag the font is...
v1 definitly. Nice colors, nice flow, I like it.
As artist said, a bit chaotic. The focal is not really there, the render is like in the bg.
Im not feeling it either, it has several focals, it looks a bit messy...
Could need some depth, change the font.
Wow, looks very unique, I really really like it, keep it up.
I would add depth, flow. I do not really feel it, sorry.
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