What is your focal actually? If the bird should be, blur the building in the bg more. If not, then blur the bird itself a bit more so you create...
It somehow lacks flow although your style is pretty nice. Keep it up.
I like it, it looks pretty good. Colors / compo is great.
Changed a few things --- Older --- [img] --- [img] --- [img] --- [img] ------ --- Changed ones --- [img] ---- [img]
Okay thank you so far, I will try to find some nice water textures to add them.
Okay, thank you, so far any more comments?
Piano, keyboard ftw. theyre both nearly the same! :D
Msn is better but I am using Icq since more of the ppl I know have icq than msn...
Yea, the mouses all work in firefox, too. Any further comments?
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Blur blur blur. :D Okay, blur the render at first and then blur a bit more the background and burn it, it looks better then. Some C4Ds for the...
Nice smudging. :D I really like it, it could need some more effects and maybe a lil better lighting but thats all. :D
Lol, I know, I just wanted to know wether it is better because you said the colors were mudy. >.> So I thought adding a bw version would be a...
Okay, thanks guys, any further comments maybe on the b/w one?
The dots are strange, remove em or add a clipping mask to them. Apart from that the style is nice. A real light source is missing and you could...
Nice lighting, good light source. The background is a bit too sharp for me. Blur it a bit more.
Good style, keep it up. The height of the canvas is a bit too low I guess.
Sorry I do not really like it... The text is hard to read and I do not really like the compo. :(
Okay thanks so far, since it is my second one, I am still improving from one to the other greatly. //Edit: Added a bw version.
Nice smudging anyways. Improve your lighting, it could be a bit better.
Heh, good one, it is nice to see you improving. A b/w version may looks better, the coloring is a bit weird. Lighting and depth is better than in...
Nice style good flow. The compo is good, too.
Very very nice work outta there. :D You work nice with lighting and flow, keep it up.
[img] --------- [img] CnC please.
v1, nice style there. The render is a bit dark anyway. It looks a bit plain, blur the bg a bit more. The text distracts a bit but apart from that...
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