Yep, a light source would be nice. Awesome work.
I do not really like it, sorry. The render looks like a bad cut if I look at her hair. Remove the text for a start, it is kinda distracting. The...
B/W without the text. Nice flow / lighting. Some C4D effects would do a nice deal. ;)
Indeed, add an omni light for try. ;) That would push the effect nicely.
You work "good" wit the text. It is kinda too blurred in the background and a lil too birght, as you mentioned. Set the light source just from one...
Wow, impressive as a first, when I think back. ;) Remove the red border, it looks ugly. ^^ Go and read some tutorials, they are always nice as...
Some really amazing work there. Some of those could be darkened / higher contrasted, watch that out. Be sure that when you are finished with your...
It could need some nice lighting.
I like that one. <3 Good work. Sharpen her face a bit more.
Lighting is pretty good on that one, I like the idea. The flow is nice, too.
v1 looks a bit too sharpened. V2 is pretty nice, I am just wondering about the right side, it seems a bit too dark. That is why it is hard to read...
Good start, keep the work up. You could add some structure to the mountains so it looks more interesting. ;)
Improve the lighting a bit. V1 for win. ;)
Your current is way better. ;) The lighting seems a bit forced and the text is not really at the right place, it distracts from the focal point....
Add effects for the flow, C4Ds or so, there are too less and yeah, it kinda looks messy.
Too much dead space in this one, try to add something there or improve your work on the lighting. The render looks a bit too sharpened at some areas.
I just like it, really a great compo!
I really like it, nice work with the lighting, you should lower down the brightness a bit.^^
Really, look up some tutorials. It does not have anything, sorry.
As metnioned, it is too bright and too blurry. Might add some C4Ds to be able to create some depth, use curves do darken it a bit.
Depth and some improvement on the lighting would be nice. I appreciate your smudging, nice work, the compo is nice as well.
It looks really nice, maybe a bit too bright.
Add a version without graniness for try.^^
Smudging is a nice idea, try to create something that does not distract too much.
Work on your depth and lighting.
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