both need a lot of work on the text and change the border in the first one it just plain looks odd
I really like the text and lighting nice job :)
this should be in the large art section and you should REALLY fix the text
nice flow but the left side feels a lil empty imo
too much plain black space in the background post a v2 with a white background and add a few gradient maps
i really like it since your not using a stock or anything like that
you should post a v2 with colour so it would be easier to cnc
i like it and the lawnmower udea would be EPIC
man LOVE IT you never seem to dissapoint
BUMP
I made two versions which ever you like better ;) [img] [img]
[img] Original:[img] I really need some CnC on this one guys
v2 is better
B U M P
thx any comments how i can improve?
[img] [img] i made this one for a friend [img] [img] [img] CnC plz
nice work i like it R.I.P MJ
i like it but get rid of the border
yea i like v2 better much better text
nice work R.I.P MJ
get rid of the bars i see them in like every sig of yours and you REALLY need to work on your text you have nice sigs but the text is an addition...
bad text, get rid of the lines under the text and the arrows or blend the arrows in more
LOVE THE VECTOR but yea what he said you should make it a lp
youre getting better
Work on text and make them smaller try reading some tutorials
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