First abstract sig in a really long time. Enjoy. [img]
[img] How is it?
The C4D is blured a bit too much and isn't blended very well.
Yeah the compo is off. Too much stuff on the right compared to the left.
I like the no text version much better.
Yeah the best advice I can give you right now is try to find really high quality renders like on Planet Renders.
Thanks for the comments! Someday I'll have a sig with decent typo.
Just a bit more stronger lighting would be nice, but the smudging is great!
I see your point. Maybe a little higher and left. I'll work on it. Are the font and text effects good though?
Go c4d's and textures! [img]
Hm, works fine for me. Unless you have like photobucket blocked I don't see how it could not work.
Here it is. Hope you guys like it! [img]
Well I just googled high quality ff. There are some nice stocks doing that. :P Thanks guys.
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Wow, lose the attitude. You won't get much in 2 hours, some people aren't online when you are. Some for some critique, I like how you seem to be...
Maybe some sharpening would help. The depth and making him look like he is in the backround is executed great.
Yeah, just try to get some colors matched up better. Also, he looks like he is floating there, so make it look like he is in the backround by...
Thanks guys. NSL was saying it was less than a weak nov, so I'm glad I got some positive feedback for once.
It's pixelated in some parts. Also, I think it would look a bit better if you put a paper texture over the backround.
Try to make the focal of the sig the focus point. Darken around it a bit more maybe.
I think it would be better if the flag was rotated a bit more clockwise so we can see more of it.
The backround is killing it.
More contrast and sharpen a bit. I think it's a bit off balanced seeing how it's so far over to the left.
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