Isn't bad environment wise but lighting is off.
These look either over-sharpened or very low quality.
Try updating the usb drivers.
Love the first with the update.
Everything is too blurry. I htink you tried to hard to create depth.
Needs to be in color I think, also too big and too blurry.
Second is much better but could use some more coloring and lighting.
Awesome work on everything.
A little too messy.
Awesome concept.
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The random fires in your tags aren't working at all. Plus being so big it's hard to focal on one point of it. This one has no depth or lighting.
Wayyyy over topazed.
I agree, topaz doesn't work with this tag.
I agree I like the coloring a lot.
I agree, the original colors worked much better.
Too messy and too many random effects.
Ahh ok, did you create all of these c4d's?
Styles have changed so this may be something completely different than what you might make right now.
I was just saying, you used the same C4D in 3 out of those 7.
I feel if you remove her, move your focal to the center a little bit more and work on the coloring it will be tons better since the smudge is nice...
I like the atmosphere but I think you blurred so much that the render looks like it's just there and floating.
So make another sig with her in it.
Nice colors in the first, but maybe use some new C4D's.
The girl in the background throws the whole flow off.
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