Love that style of smudging. In addition to what they said about focal points... make it contrast from the bg somehow.
Why'd it take 60 layers?
Work on placing the c4ds so that they compliment or create flow, not destroy it...
Second version up.
Sorry double post... computer lagged.
I like all your stuff pretty much. Ever heard of Norma Jean, Lovedrug, or Manchester Orchestra? They have great lyrics too...
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Love the render. Love the bg, consider adding a light source?
Love that color blue and the effects in it. The background's fine, but along with bonzai, it would look better blurred I think.
V1 [img] V2 [img] A little intimidating posting my work here since there's so many good artists. But I got over myself :) Any advice or...
You don't like to smudge or anything do you? Looks good. Very original style.
Closer things in focus, and things further away out of focus. Adds that 3rd dimension to the sig.
Definitely like the use of negative space, the effects, and the color. Good beans.
No real depth. Sharpen and blur some of it and probably contrast it from the bg a little more to give it a focal point.
Nice, I like your other styles better though B)
Is the design supposed to run over onto the sleeves?
sexy beast...
That's how we like it.
I like it. Only thing I can really tell is that the shadows look a little off. But it's not obvious.
Good job matching the colors of the render and bg. Some of the subtle effects give it a nice flow. Not sure about the swirlies.
I love it. Only thing I can see is that it's a little sharp in a couple spots, and that's probably just the render...
Way too much going on... I don't really feel any focal point or color scheme. There's no composition or flow and the lighting is all off. Keep...
There's a lot of halo sigs out there and I hardly see any decent ones, but this one is good.
Ahhh! I love that song. "I am the face of your affliction..." Great sig as well! I love the concept. Great effects and the text looks amazing.
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