It's a wide boarder. I like the funky style in it.
So true...
There's one place I found a mistake. Don't say "you" in a paper. Also, I see a lot of contractions, get rid of those and make sure to type out...
She obviously isn't worth your time bud.
Get that smudge tut? :)
It's cluttered, but seems to work in an odd type of way. You might be trying to combine too many styles at once.
Love that lighting!! Looks great. Only thing is that the where the stage meets the wall looks too perfect and straight. Other than that, great job.
I don't personally like backgrounds that are just a bunch of brushes, they feel flat and impersonal.
The contrast and brightness is better on V2. As for the effects, they're nice but they feel messy.
Minus the "pop-out" part.
Thanks... Hmm a gift... :D
In response to Xioushi, I think the header looks great. The contrast between the water and the square is really appealing to me and I like the...
Bump for the night :mellow:
Thanks guys :]
If v1 didn't have that text then I'd pick it. I like the depth and funkiness. Other than that, it's a bit sharp in some spots, possibly increase...
The change from render to bg is too harsh, especially around his shoulders.
Really like the colors and the lighting is great. Only thing is that it feels flat. Oh just saw that it was intentionally not blended. Going...
Thanks guys
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Of course I bought it! :D I'm gunna do another version, see if I can fix the text and colors a bit. Thanks for CC
The text placement interferes with the focal and it's flow cuts against the flow of the sig.
Thanks
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Definitely with text...
Good focal, depth, flow, c4d usage. The colors all go really well together. You gotta leave some stuff for us to critique :mellow: Just add...
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