Nice bg, good flow and c4d usage. i like the last version the best.
Wow that looks really good! There is a part of her arm that is missing though, it's really bothersome once you notice it. I wonder what it would...
thanks for the comments! i'll try to get a v2 of better text up soon. edit: V2 is up! (location: original post)
[img] trying to improve my c4d skills :P version #2 [img] version #3 [img] Comments and Criticism is welcome. :mellow:
Yeah, v3 looks really nice. kinda hurts my eyes though if i look in the center.
Not very good C4D usage... color clashes 0.o And it's kinda unbalanced the text stands out way too much. i wouldn't have added the "drop shadow."...
I like the 2nd entry more. it does need a little work though... it think it's "over blended."
it's pretty good. looks a little plain though, probably because it's really hard to work with 2 renders.
the left and right edges with the brightness is distracting. and maybe less dots. the colored one seems to need more color for some reason... I...
even though it's halo font, it really does ruin the sig. the whole thing looked a bit funny to me at first, but the more i look at it, the...
Ok, i'll try the clipping mask over the splatters, but it might look a bit weird.
thanks. the light is supposed to be the lighting, but i guess it wasn't very good.
yeah, the bg just kind annoys me. usually white looks nice, but maybe your colors are too light.
thanks. it does look a bit messy, but i think that's how i wanted it
the shadow is way too dark. text is OK, maybe switch the color
The color looks a lot better after you fixed it. I think the text stands out too much. And if there is a render, i'm not really sure what it is.
[img] Comments and criticism? :huh: I thought it turned out pretty well... oh yeah, the border is black, so you can't see it
ok, thanks for the comments. It's kinda what I thought too, but i just can't make it look like what you said for some reason.
[img] comments and criticism?
thanks. i used a lot of adjustments for color :P
The style looks really cool. overall, it looks a little messy. it's just a little hard to see the focal for me.
it's too dark in general IMO... especially too dark on the left side where the text is. text looks a little awkward, probably the font. but...
Maybe I should add better lighting...? maybe that's why it is so dark. or add lighting, since i don't think i added it at all :P thanks btw :)
I haven't photoshopped for several months now... so I decided to make something. I thought it turned out ok-ish. :huh: [img] comments and...
all 7.8/10
Separate names with a comma.
