First one is awesome. Second one, render is too big, and too bright.
It's good, but the colors shouldn't really be green.
needs color. and yes, you can give it color even when its b/w
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Effects are just C4D's, that sun is very distracting/bad, and no blending. Work on it.
why? because you pasted in C4D's and blurred?
pretty good except for border and brightness/contrast
[img] I kinda like it, not too much.
best use of this stock i've ever seen
Work on effects, tone, and colors.
The whole thing is just a mess, simple as that.
First looks like a good WIP Second looks done and not so great.
Curly's tut? (Spiderman tag) Very nice on all of them.
I agree as well
thats some hot stuff ya got there
Rearn Engrish Prease.
decent, but upper corners are weird, and it's pretty dark.
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very weird effects. too much wave, can see part of the render, needs smudging over it or something, good lighting, bad depth.
nice, but colors are too clashy for me.
v1: too big, great lighting v2: awesome v3: awesome + great lighting and depth overall very hot
niceness gets you nowhere.
first sucks, it looks like you just made a bunch of changes to the shatter C4D wave effect on the second is weird, and the tech effects don't...
looks like MtG to me, but I'm not sure.
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