Depth needs a bit more work. Text fits pretty good, nice job on the effects too.
The effect over the left side of the face is a bit distracting.
Cool concept, but needs a bit of a flow somewhere. Looks a little too wavy :P.
Nice effects and all, but kind of cloudy.
Colors are kinda monotone. Needs more depth, keep up the work though.
Smudging is nice, but some parts on the render is kinda messy.
Second smudging is better, gives it more depth and color.
I think I need to darken the left a bit. [img]
Yeah, slight and sp have the best suggestions it seems. Try one of them. Can't think of what else could be wrong.
Yeah purple on the colored one throws it off. That's really all I have to say in this one.
The first one is probably the best one. Right side is kind of boring compared to the left, and the effects on the left seem messy.
Needs some blending to the render. I think there needs to be more effects and some more depth as well.
Both images have been removed =/
Agreed, too sharp in some spots. Theres good flow in it though. Text is okay, but needs adjusting.
Always the text with you man? xD, no I understand, it sucks :P. Thanks for the comments everyone.
Thanks man.
The splatter down the face looks weird, maybe move the text over to the left and make it smaller.
Same thing xD. No, but, it's close.
Yeah, no green FTW
Add some more effects around the render. The background has a good mood to it for the render, but, needs more effects around it.
Background is kind of messy, and needs a flow and some depth. Improvement though, I can see it. Just keep looking up different ideas and tuts...
Text and border need to go. For text, just try and fit it in the right spot. Background needs more depth to it, keep reading up on some...
Nice colors and all, just not liking the bottom left corner.
Thanks
No, heard it was bad, but it depends what type of movies you like. But, it's not easy to see everything in it, and the counter is distracting,...
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