Background needs more depth and try to work on coloring, at the moment it's monotone.
Tried something different this time. I like it :P. [img] [img]
Not too fond of the bottom black part.
I like a lot but still haven't finished many of them. My favorite is One Piece. Next it's like a 3 way tie with FullMetal Alchemist, Bleach, and...
The white dots are a little annoying.
Well, I might get it like I said, but not for a while. I'm just afraid it wont keep me interested for long. Anyways, what I'm going to reserve...
Mixed feelings on this one xD. Some like Black and White, others like colored :P.
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I know, it just seemed to ruin my view on the game, the way they talk about it makes it seem as though all it is is shooting and killing hoes....
Eyes are the most important part in anime xD. It gives the entire mood and look basically.
Not to make people made, but, I hate the game. Too many little kids get it and then sit there and brag about it and say they're going to kill...
Eyes are thumbs down for me xD, can't ever get em right. Thanks though, I'll improve as I draw more :P.
Lol about a week ago I did the line art, finally finished the coloring, it only took about 2 days xD....
Fix the text, and maybe blend it in a bit more, if possible.
Some parts need sharpening maybe. Background needs some work too.
Okay thanks.
The effects are cool, but empty otherwise.
Text needs to go, main thing it needs is depth.
Maybe =/, guess I need to try and add some more effects.
Thanks.
Looks nice, cool shapes and all. Great colors too.
Most need work with text, try to pick colors from somewhere in the tag and use it for text. Don't try to go crazy with it either, something nice...
Try and get the sides and all to be the same color as the render or vice versa, it looks like it's sticking out too much.
Try smaller sizes like dinges said, and yeah, try finding some tutorials though, they will really help you out a lot. You learn so many new ways...
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