1st one has nice coloring though the lighting could use some fixing. 2nd one is meh.
needs some more contrast
remove the text, sharpen up your focal a bit and blur some of the effects. coloring and lighting need work mostly
your most recents the best, though the text overwhelms your focal
nice work, like most of the color schemes used.
text and bar doesnt quite fit in, when making b\w make sure its all b\w. there are a few exceptions though
nice work, prefer the b\w version. 3rd one needs some more contrast and lighting to match the orange of his helmet.
from final fantasy VII, and FF7 Crisis core. Zack is the 1st class soldier who was killed by Sephiroth before Cloud came in took his sword and...
coloring is messed up in some places, need to work on your composition and effects. also try to stick to one focal
the lines dont really fit and the lighting could use work mostly.
sharpen the guy a bit more, remove the text, and its a bit monotone.
the coloring needs to be more vibrant and have more variety, and zack doesnt seem to blend in all that well with the background. the purple c4d on...
some of the lines are pixelated and over sharpened while your render doesnt really blend in with the color scheme. add a few more gradient maps to...
the left side is a tad bit better than the right side, mostly its your lighting that is screwed up. the right side should be darker while the...
bring the sprite in front of those layers as it just looks like a background with a sprite behind it. your focal should be in the foreground and...
v1 is pretty nice, though it looks more like a hard brush rather then pen tooled lines.
as you said the lighting is bad, and the text doesnt fit in with the rest of the tag. try a photofilter on cyan and blurring the people at the...
lighting and depths ok, though i would improve the coloring as some parts look desaturated and what not.
try some more tuts, decent for firsts though i guess.
needs some more contrast imo.
mostly need to work on colors and lighting for this one. i cant tell if its black and white or a little little bit cyanish
the white bars disrupt the flow of the tag the colorings pretty good other wise but the orange brushing doesnt really fit in
2 has a better focal but the no real effects. 1 has too many chaotic effects and the focal doesnt stick to one place
i dont see the line your talking about. add a b\w gradient on luminosity and a few more adjustment layers
like the 1st one, though remove the chomik text and try not to just use a soft brushing for lighting. there are other ways to make it fit the tag...
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