add a b\w layer on luminocity on lowered opacity, and work on the coloring.
colors are nice, but its too plain overall. + its really light, burn some places.
better, though the coloring could use some more variety.
i see.
lag much?
french connection united kingdom?
once again, super nintendo ftw. all spam threads are epic fail.
effects are pretty messy on both, and the lighting on the first one near the flowers takes away from the focal. 2nd one i see some nice effects in...
try working with a smaller canvas, someone taught me that working with a larger canvas also means having to fill it up with more effects, etc....
for your 2nd sig, its not half bad. try working with more of a variety of colors as you have a monotone sig. i suggest maybe kamangir?'s tut in...
try some more tuts, the text overrides your focal(in this case it should be the SHIPS). effects should go over the whole renders and compo +...
effects and coloring could use work, lighting looks fake and the floating head look doesnt really work.
add some more limeish green to add to the coloring, take a hard px brush and smudge it according to what you have so far. you could possibly also...
too small to actually tell whats going on, sharpen it up a bit too. some of the colors are nice, but the drastic change from orange to the blue in...
too plain and colors have no variety. add some solid c4ds and some color balances.
overcontrasted, text is bad and remove the effects on the render. effects need better composition.
try some more tuts. you've got the basic idea a bit more but it needs better execution and blending.
white vertical line ruins the flow, and maybe add a cloud in front of her on lighten.
interesting tag, but the splatter takes away from your main focal which should be the text.
defined light source could be added, render looks pretty high quality otherwise.
blending, bg, and effects need work here. also a little depth couldnt hurt.
colors could use some variety and vibrancy, crop out some of the bottom of the tag.
try some more tuts, save text for later when you've learned some more.
effects looks messy and you can see the duplicates of the effect. lighting also needs work as it just looks like one soft brush. try working with...
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