work on focal, composition, effects, coloring
ill try to make one tomorrow.
thing on the right is distracting from your focal.
mountains are too sharp on the right and also the grass, text kills it, you dont have any real lighting or good colors.
effects are messy and have no organization, lighting is off and colors are weird.
effects are too messy, lighting needs work. last one is your best.
the sig not so much the lp is great though. colors could use some improving but the overall concept and execution is great.
keep trying more tuts, there is nothing more you can learn from doing this kind of sig.
the brush and person was hard to notice, so far this looks like a wip. the vectors could use some work, and it just needs more.
take out what looks like a pixel stretch, work on your colors, compo, and effects.
could be a little bit more colorful.
meh, you still got your skillz in you.
effects are composed nicely, though you could work on the coloring. maybe a warm photofilter will help.
lighting effects and colors mostly need work, bg looks a little grainy imo.
lacks effects and colors
concept is good, effects could use work. the pen tooledlines need work imo, add some more to them to make them interesting.
m4a1.
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coloring and depth need most work here.
looks a little lq. prolly cus you used a photo.needs work on everything overall.
composition, coloring, and lighting need work.
2nd one has a bit better compo, though both could improve on their coloring.
like it, maybe add a yellow or blue layer on lighten with lower opacity then a b\w layer on luminosity.
right side effects could use work, left side is empty. text needs to go.
its too light, cant see it unless i look closely.
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