first has some sharp parts, coloring and compo need work in both.
text needs work, composition and coloring too. maybe crop it down a little, use a smaller canvas
its too obvious you liquified it while those parts that you liquified dont fit in with the rest of your bg
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uber pwnt tbh.
1st one needs a better flow and could be cropped a bit.
okie dokes, thank you for the very clear(though epic) explanation.
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render looks warped, hold shift when resizing your images. effects mostly need work, the pentool line on the sword is just too plain imo.
effects, colors, compo, and text could use some more work. the white things that looks like you blurred or smudged it dont flow with the tag.
over contrasted, lighting is overwhelming and effects and compo could use some work.
some c4d positioning could use some work, and indeed her shoulder is strange. lighting also needs improvement, keep some of the c4ds on the left...
its alright, could use some stars to fill the negative space and do something with all that blue cyanish color
for lr on the c4ds do you mean posting rights..?
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nice job with the coloring, though i feel the person herself could have been colored a bit more w\ pentool.
mostly the right side needs work, and it would probably be better to keep this black and white without him being randomly normal colored.
played piano for 2 years, guitar for bout a year and a half (still going..though havent played in a while) and sax for bout 6 years (still...
coloring could use some work, pretty good considering your 2nd after the break. the lighting needs to be composed differently, like it matches but...
colors bit monotone, render needs some more blending some places are too sharp.
needs some more solid effects imo.
effects and colors need work, needs some more contrast. lighting is a bit strange too.
not really liking the first on, the smudging isnt composed very smoothly and the colors dont appeal to me. 2nds a bit better, but i dislike the...
way to plain and monotone imo.
dislike the left side mainly because of the negative space and its all red but gj with the smudging.
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