Apart from the slap dash typography. (thats my new phrase, Slap it! and Dash it!) It seems she has too much mascara on. (is that what you girls...
The lighting can be improved greatly. Those zig zag lines are unnecessary in my opinion. Apart from that, good job. -
The small text at the bottom needs a colour change. -
I think this sig is amazing. I don't know why, but everytime you post I stop and look at that signature. Brilliant. -
Its not "pentooled" it is vector. It looks good, can't wait to see it vectored. I love your sigs by the way. (wooo 101st post!" -
I pay alot of attention because I'm a graphic designer, its what we do. lol Imaginary or not, you have stated this is an advertising poster,...
I LOVE!!!! daft punk. This poster doesn't express their kind of music though. What is Alive 2010? What are the dates? Where is alive 2010 held?...
I think its brilliant and perfect to be honest. -
Typography is terrible. It looks like you just slapped it there. -
I really hate posters like these because the client restricts the designer; which is why they all look the same. This one looks good in-terms of...
Damn you've noticed! ahh! lol nice find I was thinking of doing a vector of her, but I wanted to experiment on using photography and design...
Brilliant! but it could have been better. I'd change the colour scheme. -
Yes it does. Well done! -
http://www.gamerenders.com/forum/index.php?showtopic=371081 -
After all the comments and criticisms I've said. Some of you may be wondering : "So Acrima, why don't you do anything?" Well apart from showing...
If it was the "depressed christmas" look you were going for, you've certainly hit the nail and well done. If it wasn't, then read on. It looks...
Don't you just love photoshop :P -
Terrible typography. The background doesn't go with the image. I think it needs some contrast or something. -
You could send it to me and I'll see what I can do with the typography if you want. I don't mind. -
Not bad. Great thinking. - The planet or moon, should be smaller and positioned better. At the moment its screaming out "LOOK AT ME!!!!" - You...
Terrible fonts and typography. I reckon you can improve it greatly. (the typography that is.) -
It is understandable that it is your first and it won't be good. Stop thinking about being good. Good is just a majority vote and doesn't always...
Theres nothing wrong with this sig. It looks great and its different. -
Tooooo simple. I agree with Nolan. I'd prefer not having the transparency on the characters so low because the characters are the most exciting...
Why are you hiding your typography? Be proud of it! :D the light effects are too bright. Overall it needs more detail, but its going well....
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