Hmm i dont really like th color and it seems the opacity of the render/bg is set low or something.. the text effects are cool but like i said the color/bg are a let down. 6.5/10
mass, atta boy, much better. ONly thing is, u make it too 2D, get me? like its all one plain, boring. Try not to brush over the renders as much, and use different brushes and brush opacities on different layers, making it seem like there is many levels. Just fool with the effects, and steer clear of making it all plain and one color. But the text is much better, along with the overall presence. Just work on the brushing, try and bring out different colors, and try and keep the original render colors.
