theres a black line sticking out of the gun and the hand right in the middle and the hair has a black outline a little and theres a title on it by his foot and its a little chopy by the handle of the sword but other then that i like it
Not bad, erm did you use blur or smudge on the leg? And same comments as above, but all the same not bad at all for a second render. You might also want to resize if its for a wall paper go with the 1024x768 pixel size, I have a laptop and really had to do some serious scrolling to see the whole image.
