looks very dull and boring im afraid. imagine that as an actual website. would you be interested in that site when u look at it?
What the ---- is with the people who can't even make a decent template telling people too noobish...etc. That is not a critique at all, and if your going to say that you have to atleast back it up
pretty boring... but it's your first so dont worry.. look around in the template section here and get some ideas on how other people make their designs.. also look at some tutorials to learn how to do it. just search google.
Extreme lack of colour, and the Pixel text ruins it I'm afraid. Pretty good for a first though - Check out some of the recommended tutorial sites and you'll go far
thats usually how it goes u take all that neg vibes that people sprung out on ya, makes that next so much better. my first temp was all tables ..........6 years later I can code an entire site in Notepad with no flaws ready to ship. good effort, lets see the next one.
