1st Ever Render - Half Life 2

Hey all this is my first ever render soo take it a lil easy on me lol



Hope its ok !

 

any comments at all??

 

its choppy.. too chopy

 

whats that mean? sorry ive only just started doing renders

 

you can see there are corners. it is not beautiful..

 

too many sharp edges. i dont like how fuzzy the thing in the background is either :/

 

u shud of left the water at the bottom

 

Its not bad for your first, but its still choppy (not smooth at corners) and theres a white line around his hair, but keep it up you'll get there.

 

i was thinking of leaving the water in but then i didnt no if it would look good , Thanks for the comments ill keep trying you nver no ..

 

hmm i like the whole walllpaper instead....

 

Pretty Choppy But..Stilll Way Better Than My First .

 

really choppy, I could never use that in a sig, It's just way too choppy and you shouldnt have tried to render his legs or that creature in the corner.

 

for your first, its great... keep practicing.... soon you will be really pro at it...... g/j

 

good cut, but i dun like the render all that much