First Render In Months

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  1. Majin

    Majin Senior Member

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    ok this is my first render in 2months... creds and +rep appreciated.
     
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    …why is there a drop shadow? :blink:
     
  3. Majin

    Majin Senior Member

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    got bored.................
     
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    Not bad for the first one in months bro.

    There is only 3 things I can see that would make it better.

    1) Try to find an image of the entire plane... Generally it's hard to find, and this one obviously probably pictured only what you see here.

    2) Don't use a drop shadow. The idea of a RENDER is to jsut have the images, and no backrounds or shadows, etc. Not to mention that the shadow is too large for your canvas, as you can see it gets cutoff in the lower right hand corner.

    3) The 2 engines in the rear of the jet... One has that thingy coming out of it on the right, while the engine on the left doesn't... Is that how it was in the image, or did you crop it off on accident?


    That said, if you added a dropshadow to cover up a jagged edge, there are ways to smooth the edges out.


    Anyways...

    Those are just some suggeestions, but its a pretty good render and a nice pic. GJ under the win following the lines of the plane, and GJ with the curved edges.

    Keep on truckin'!
    -Priest
     
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    i noticed the back engine aswell.ithink uve cut sumink off mate
     
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    The only thing that I thought after I made the last post was that either it didn't have it to begin with, or he did indeed cut it off...

    But when you see a real jet like that, those open and close to divert thrust, and usually they open and close together, but not always...


    Can we see the original image maybe?
     
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    lol its ok but the drop shadow ..... (lol?)
     
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    Yea, it would be great with no drop shadow
     
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    Nice Render
     
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    Nice Render Man. GJ.
     
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    GOOD ---- SON I LIKE IT SORTA BUT GOT ALOT OF RENDERS ALREADY
     
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    awesome render man, just awesome
     
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    I like it, but i won't use it coz I don't like airplanes on sigs.
     
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    not bad man, will cred it use
     
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