New Signature

Redid Version:


WHat do you guys think?

 

Not to be harsh or anything, but I think it suffers the same problem my sigs do:

It's empty in a large space. It just seems dull to the eye and not eye-catching. I'd tell you how to improve, but as I said, I have the same problem.

Overall, it's good, just not eye-catching.

 

i disagree whit danmattia, cus the empty sace isnt a bad thing it fits the sig very wel, i like the collors and brusing very smoothly done, the render is awsome, its just al ats up geat 9.5/10 im liking it badly

 

nice brush technique my opinion fading character coulda gone better but very nice id say 7/10

 

u could maybe blend the right side a bit more on this piece for the rest...

8.5/10

evan

 

Thre isn't really much to see..you have a weird interesting render on a plain simplistic bg.

 

Alrighty, I redid the BG and render, and otehr things contrasts/brightness, i think it looks a lil better now..what do u think?

 

It's better now, but still bland on the left. The empty space is just detracting from the true quality of the image.

 

2nd is much better than the first. Still can't read the quote to easily though. Still nj, 8.5/10

 

i;m with ivy v2 is much better already

but yeah gj 8.5/10

evan

 

still ike v1 donno why just do

 

I have to agree

 

that open space stands out way too much

 

fuckin sick. i love it. 10/10.