well i dont think that the render suits that kinda bg coz it looks too "tech-ish" and the border is just white. good try tho 6/10
think the render needs a bit of blending, like the collors and bg, the fond is good 2 matches the bg nicely, only the border realy needs some work its to plain, 7/10 if you fix border and blnd render a bit 8.5/10 maby
