Mr. Cheeky And Phat Alberts Freestyle Thread

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  1. Nick

    Nick Well-Known Member

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    I don't think you seperated the lines properly, but it was okay.
     
  2. Majin

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    can't rap for ----... but those are some funny things.
     
  3. WhiT3MisT

    WhiT3MisT Well-Known Member

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    cheeky add my msn already planning out my lines in notepad
     
  4. frodro

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    well.... the truth is that ryming/ freestyling isnt about planning
    its jus supposed to come straight from ur head not planning and
    stuff if u planned it then its not freestyling jus like in rap battles
    they dont plan it, its supposed to be made up just as ur rapping it... otherwise it doesnt count as freestyling that would be then like making a song or a single lmfao and my 1 was made in really like
    2 mins it wasnt planned if i planned it wouldve bin alot better
     
  5. TSR311

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    Free style eh?

    Don't Come Lookin For Me,
    Cause I'm more than u bargain,
    Consider ya Self a Target,
    Colder than your Local Supermarket,
    Don't Argue,
    Lyrically inept,
    T.V. Screen Pretty boy,
    call me johhny depp
    and don't believe i'm wack
    just because ya boys told you,
    Or Nobody will find u,
    like u work for boost mobile,
    and i'm not bowwow,
    So I Won't try to hold u,
    Consider me the master,
    i'm the one that sold u,
    I Get More girls,
    Than john legend at the piano,
    trust me when i say
    i break ankles than the sopranos
    back ta business though,
    i kick fire like its nothin,
    I Walk Through these blocks,
    Neva Catch this Brotha runnin,
    and don't say that my rhymes are borin,
    cause i'm on the rebound,
    like i'm martin laurence,


    That's Off The Top Of The Head.. Cheaky.. Add Me to msn too.. i got flow.. mostly...

    [email protected]
     
  6. [GR]Nova

    [GR]Nova Well-Known Member

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    nice thread lol :P

    (ps 600 posts :))
     
  7. WhiT3MisT

    WhiT3MisT Well-Known Member

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    me and cheeky going head to head. will be posted today or tomorrow.
     
  8. iced up

    iced up Well-Known Member

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    word
    my name is slurpee
    and my lines are hot like your mom
    so dont playa hate cuz i drop bombs
    i had sex with your grandma
    and my tv is bigger than yours
    so dont mess cuz im the best
    you better have a bullet proof vest because im going to stick a pencil through your chest
    word homies 4 lyfe babie

    My attempt at a freestyle ;)
     
  9. SomeThingCreepy

    SomeThingCreepy Well-Known Member

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    Listen,
    You F'in losers are pitiful,
    buncha nerds tryin to be lyrical
    no flow at all,
    so sloppy like,
    watchin any of u play basketball
    you fags are uncoordinated losers
    play games all day,
    and call each other "abusers"
    oh no! what a "leet user"
    Frickin dorks, go do somethin productive
    instead of wackin off in the shower
    how long did it take u guys to write those?
    four to five hours?
    this is true freestyle, rookie
    ima true emcee
    your Fricken mouse speed will never impress me
    and then there be those fags
    who think they're hot stuff cuz they're good
    man, open your eyes
    you sayin ur not a loser
    is like elton john sayin he don't screw guys
    all lies
    Fricken dumbasses on G R
    do society a favor
    and jump off a jumbo-jet and end up in the ER
    waste of space
    your lives are a freakin disgrace
    just cuz you saw 8 mile
    doesn't give u da right to freestyle
    go back to lookin at kid porn
    you freakin pedofiles
    im taking all the battles
    all ya'll takin is a seat
    dont respond to this
    cuz you faggots know u can't compete
     
  10. iced up

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    Wow he's so good.
     
  11. Ice Cube

    Ice Cube Well-Known Member

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    I give out jabs like a boxer,
    deal with it proper,
    because i'm your pops, ask the doctor,
    if you dont wanna face the facts,
    you can face the gats,
    be careful what you say when you chat,
    throw you in the boot thats a wrap,
    my nigga hold guns, and they clap,
    becuase i'll roll through your endz,
    in a blacked out benz,
    pop, pop, there goes your friends,
    yeh, im covered in gemz.........

    @ anyone who wants ..........^_^
     
  12. TSR311

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    I'm so sick of these nigga's from the suburbs,
    Rappin bout nine's and cuss words,
    but when fightin starts they hide under the covers,
    Preschool similies,
    posted on a board for friends to see,
    then they most likely say
    "see mom, told u that i was a G"
    enough is enough
    Most of these people ain't tuff,
    cause they probabally sittin at home,
    whining about a bandage on a cut,
    or why they didn't get a tut,
    or how they can get creds,
    Startin to think these nigga's never
    once got HE@D,
    try to drop knowledge instead of tryin to be G,
    because lets face it,
    most of you have never seen the police,
    so i'm gonna leave this topic,
    with a well known fact,
    You've been proven non gangsta,
    if you don't know how ta react...

    and to that somethingcreepy guy,
    u better watch who u address,
    cause i won't hesitate,
    to beat a nigga ta death,
    and though u seem to be skilled,
    i'm not really impressed,
    cause my sister sings the same lyrics
    from that nigga wit squarepants..

    ;) ^_^ It's all in good fun..
     
  13. Ice Cube

    Ice Cube Well-Known Member

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    somethingcreepy, what a loser,
    running his mouth but nigga, you aint met bruza,
    you know you stuff your mouth like a pig,
    while crying to your mum coz no-one likes your sig,
    crying about a -rep,
    thinking about commiting death,
    because you wanna commit sucidie,
    because your a geek with no pride,
    because once im on a mission,
    theres no escaping like a mental condition,
    i will hunt you wherever you go,
    i'll take niggas like you blow to blow,
    because im a veteran,
    and y'all already know who im better then,
    my powers keep on rising,
    but murking geeks like you,
    losers start recognisng,
     
  14. Mr. Cheeky

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    isnt that nas?... except he says "im a braveheart veteran" ? lol
     
  15. TSR311

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    isnt that nas?... except he says "im a braveheart veteran" ? lol [/b][/quote]
    I Was Just About to say the same thing :)
     

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