Mr. Cheeky And Phat Alberts Freestyle Thread

I don't think you seperated the lines properly, but it was okay.

 

can't rap for ----... but those are some funny things.

 

cheeky add my msn already planning out my lines in notepad

 

well.... the truth is that ryming/ freestyling isnt about planning
its jus supposed to come straight from ur head not planning and
stuff if u planned it then its not freestyling jus like in rap battles
they dont plan it, its supposed to be made up just as ur rapping it... otherwise it doesnt count as freestyling that would be then like making a song or a single lmfao and my 1 was made in really like
2 mins it wasnt planned if i planned it wouldve bin alot better

 

Free style eh?

Don't Come Lookin For Me,
Cause I'm more than u bargain,
Consider ya Self a Target,
Colder than your Local Supermarket,
Don't Argue,
Lyrically inept,
T.V. Screen Pretty boy,
call me johhny depp
and don't believe i'm wack
just because ya boys told you,
Or Nobody will find u,
like u work for boost mobile,
and i'm not bowwow,
So I Won't try to hold u,
Consider me the master,
i'm the one that sold u,
I Get More girls,
Than john legend at the piano,
trust me when i say
i break ankles than the sopranos
back ta business though,
i kick fire like its nothin,
I Walk Through these blocks,
Neva Catch this Brotha runnin,
and don't say that my rhymes are borin,
cause i'm on the rebound,
like i'm martin laurence,


That's Off The Top Of The Head.. Cheaky.. Add Me to msn too.. i got flow.. mostly...

[email protected]

 

nice thread lol

(ps 600 posts )

 

me and cheeky going head to head. will be posted today or tomorrow.

 

word
my name is slurpee
and my lines are hot like your mom
so dont playa hate cuz i drop bombs
i had sex with your grandma
and my tv is bigger than yours
so dont mess cuz im the best
you better have a bullet proof vest because im going to stick a pencil through your chest
word homies 4 lyfe babie

My attempt at a freestyle

 

Listen,
You F'in losers are pitiful,
buncha nerds tryin to be lyrical
no flow at all,
so sloppy like,
watchin any of u play basketball
you fags are uncoordinated losers
play games all day,
and call each other "abusers"
oh no! what a "leet user"
Frickin dorks, go do somethin productive
instead of wackin off in the shower
how long did it take u guys to write those?
four to five hours?
this is true freestyle, rookie
ima true emcee
your Fricken mouse speed will never impress me
and then there be those fags
who think they're hot stuff cuz they're good
man, open your eyes
you sayin ur not a loser
is like elton john sayin he don't screw guys
all lies
Fricken dumbasses on G R
do society a favor
and jump off a jumbo-jet and end up in the ER
waste of space
your lives are a freakin disgrace
just cuz you saw 8 mile
doesn't give u da right to freestyle
go back to lookin at kid porn
you freakin pedofiles
im taking all the battles
all ya'll takin is a seat
dont respond to this
cuz you faggots know u can't compete

 

Wow he's so good.

 

I give out jabs like a boxer,
deal with it proper,
because i'm your pops, ask the doctor,
if you dont wanna face the facts,
you can face the gats,
be careful what you say when you chat,
throw you in the boot thats a wrap,
my nigga hold guns, and they clap,
becuase i'll roll through your endz,
in a blacked out benz,
pop, pop, there goes your friends,
yeh, im covered in gemz.........

@ anyone who wants ..........^_^

 

I'm so sick of these nigga's from the suburbs,
Rappin bout nine's and cuss words,
but when fightin starts they hide under the covers,
Preschool similies,
posted on a board for friends to see,
then they most likely say
"see mom, told u that i was a G"
enough is enough
Most of these people ain't tuff,
cause they probabally sittin at home,
whining about a bandage on a cut,
or why they didn't get a tut,
or how they can get creds,
Startin to think these nigga's never
once got HE@D,
try to drop knowledge instead of tryin to be G,
because lets face it,
most of you have never seen the police,
so i'm gonna leave this topic,
with a well known fact,
You've been proven non gangsta,
if you don't know how ta react...

and to that somethingcreepy guy,
u better watch who u address,
cause i won't hesitate,
to beat a nigga ta death,
and though u seem to be skilled,
i'm not really impressed,
cause my sister sings the same lyrics
from that nigga wit squarepants..

^_^ It's all in good fun..

 

somethingcreepy, what a loser,
running his mouth but nigga, you aint met bruza,
you know you stuff your mouth like a pig,
while crying to your mum coz no-one likes your sig,
crying about a -rep,
thinking about commiting death,
because you wanna commit sucidie,
because your a geek with no pride,
because once im on a mission,
theres no escaping like a mental condition,
i will hunt you wherever you go,
i'll take niggas like you blow to blow,
because im a veteran,
and y'all already know who im better then,
my powers keep on rising,
but murking geeks like you,
losers start recognisng,

 

isnt that nas?... except he says "im a braveheart veteran" ? lol

 

isnt that nas?... except he says "im a braveheart veteran" ? lol [/b][/quote]
I Was Just About to say the same thing