your current is good. this one is bad. 1st to bright, not very eye friendly. text is barely readable. the render is stuck in there. no actual blending. sorry man. and the guy that says teh sig pwns has text with clouds and a render and a color change. think twice.
I hate it! IT SUCKS! J/k, it is much better and pleasing to the eye. One thing I would fix though would be the text. I don't know why but for me I keep thing it says "DBUS".... 8.5/10 for a rating.
Welll it's an abstract-grunge mix... obviously that's not going too well with me. I'll be glad to show you some of my regular bland grunge's.