Ok this is my 2nd render and sorry about the left leg it was so dark i couldnt see it so sorry i tried my hardest but here it is: Original Picture:
Damn that sucks no ones going to want to user that my bad you guys next time wont pic a very drak picture so sorry guys.
for 2nd on such a dark bg you did an excellent job, your on your way. my advice is to start on wallpappers as large as possible, those are always easier as long as you do simple ones of coarse. but it makes complicated ones easier and you get use to weird or dark edges.