Another Noir Render

Hey this is my second public render, only 2 ppl posted on my last one and with negative comments, Hopefully you'll like this one better than my last...



Sorry it's not that great b/c I had to do it on a touchpad I know I missed some white next to her stomach and under her left armpit, I'll fix later if I get time, other than that what do you think of it?

I'm not asking for creds but any donations are appriciated

 

its ok but she has a green line all way round her which isnt a problem.she is nicely cut out and i cant really see no choppyness on her.well render will cred if use

 

Not bad I like it

7/10!!

 

I've seen the exact same render, but in different colors... did you alter the colors at all?

 

Nope, I found it in a background on animewallpapers.com and thanks for the comments guys

 

yes, girls with guns. love it

 

ok, but lots of white around her still... give it another shot