First Real Render Doom3

Hey all, this is like my first proper render ( with polygonal lasso tool ). Any help/advice would be appreciated and also if you use I would really like some credits or reputation ( only little amount ).

 

i can see quite a lot of white around the chain sor and i dont realy like the pic, but its good for your first. next time try the pen tool

 

too bloody for my style, but nice cutting

 

Thanks for the replies guys and I will try the pen tool. I made a sig with it and this is what I came up with. ( Not bad I think you can hardly notice the mistakes when it's in there. )

 

the sig doesnt flow right in my opinion...
it aint but... but has no flow

 

lol, I don't get it, and if you ask me I reckon your just spamming these boards to try to earn credits and post count because your new. But like.. it was a test to see how well a background goes with the render.

 

Nice attempt, it will look better after more practice. And as micko_2 said you can get some kickass results with the pen tool

 

Ok , cool thanks.

 

good for first, but yeah theres white.
like others have said, use pen.