Yep, first post and it's a render. It's my first render too, so don't be harsh. It's not too bad in my opinion. Oh, and I just noticed the spots up top, but that can easily be fixed. Edit: Fixed.
wow thats mad nice, Will cred if used. Though I whould suggest trimming a bit on the edge of her right um hairball
I fixed it up a bit, though the white parts there are actually part of the render itself, I'm guessing they're a reflection of some sort (if you zoom in you'll see that it overlaps on the black).