It's not bad, a lil choppy in places, his hair for example. It's a good try though, just needs a little bit more work.
Are you really alowed to render that? It´s from this page: http://www.crepuscolo.net/immagini/fantasy/jean/ I don´t speak the language which is used on the site, but I don´t think they allow people to copy their images. I´m sorry if I´m wrong, but I felt that I need to tell you about this.
I tried to touch it up Also, whose copied it? I just cut one of the pictures out, I'd like to see them do anything about it, plus I just googled pirate on google images, and that was one of them, so eh.