My First Song

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  1. Bisdale

    Bisdale Well-Known Member

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    Song about a girl

    This is a song about a girl
    And her name happens to be
    Jasmine like the flower
    And it seems she’s got the power
    o~~~~~ver me.

    now I'm not one to beat around the bush
    and jasmine you’ve got a great toosh
    so ill be frank with you
    its not your fault
    I just wanna spank it to you
    Cause you're hot.

    I know you may not be interested in me
    But you’re the hottest girl that ive ever seen
    Your ass is perfect and your tits are too
    These are the things that I wanna do......

    Pile driver, missionary, donkey punch,
    Doggie style, 69er, hot lunch
    Wrap around but grab, reverse cow girl
    Ill even put it in your ear and give it a whirl.

    Now I'm not making a wise crack
    But jasmine you’ve got a great rack
    So ill be frank with you its not your fault
    I wanna titti---- you cause you’re hot.

    I know you may not be interested in me
    But you’re the hottest girl that ive ever seen
    Your ass is perfect and your tits are too
    These are the things that I wanna do......
    Pile driver, missionary, donkey punch,
    Doggie style, 69er, hot lunch
    Wrap around but grab, reverse cow girl
    Ill even put it in your ear and give it a whirl.

    This is a song about a girl
    Uggo’s make me hurl
    But this girl is a hottie,
    Yeah she’s got a great body
    I hope she wants to spank it with me

    What ya reckon of my song? I did a bit yesterday and finished it off just now.
     
  2. cochise

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    ...................... :eek: ........................ :huh: ................................. :lol: .............yay
     
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    lmao

    nice song man
     
  4. Blazeman

    Blazeman Am I Evil?

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    Riiigggghhhttt.
     
  5. Bisdale

    Bisdale Well-Known Member

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    Haha, I thought it was pretty good.
     
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    nice song man :D
     
  7. KILL.switch

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    lol very..emm... nice :huh: :D
     
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    Andrew Well-Known Member

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    Hmms, very flattering if your name is "Jasmine".

    You might not want to sing that to her untill your on 3rd date, at least. lol

    BFTP
     
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    lol thats a funny song if u havnt dated for like month/months
    i garantee u'll get bitch slapped....unless shes a sluty teenager
    not to many though....
     
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    lol, that is funny, sell it to a local band or summin'.
     
  11. PeterPan

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    hahahaha thats funny nice song man
     
  12. ShotokanTiger

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    haha nice one , dont rip it!
     
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    "put it in your ear"? :huh:

    oh well, the song has a pretty nice flow.
     
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    lol nice song... very interseting :huh:
     
  15. Xtream_five40

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    When will it hit the airwaves? ^_^


    Nice song you got there. A bit... ummmm... adult oriented but still good none the less. :D
     

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