Ill go ahead and crit the newer version. In a sig, you want to have something that lets people know its you. In this sig, the eyes are mainly the place my eyes go first, not the text. I'd try flipping the render horizontally. And another thing, in the upper left hand corner put a black splotch or something, it seems awkward. Background seems almost... greyscaled? I love the text though. 7/10 [Xtrah]