First Render, Please Give Feedback. :)

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  1. Jun 30, 2005 at 2:37 AM #1
    OldWolf

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    This is my first try at rendering... it wasn't too tough, but most of the background was white which helped. Please give me feedback on what I did right or wrong. :)

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    If its worth using, please cred or rep. :)
     
  2. Jun 30, 2005 at 2:43 AM #2
    Lucas-

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    make bg transparent and save aas a .png
     
  3. Jun 30, 2005 at 2:44 AM #3
    Lucas-

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    o and his hair.. try a less complicated one next time.. maybe a anime one with a black outline on it or something
     
  4. Jun 30, 2005 at 2:51 AM #4
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    Pretty good. Good job
     
  5. Jun 30, 2005 at 3:06 AM #5
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    Fixed up a few white spots, made a .pgn and the background SHOULD have been transparent... I'll look into what I missed. :P
     
  6. Jun 30, 2005 at 3:31 AM #6
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    that pretty damn nice for your first render good work keep it up dude
     
  7. Jun 30, 2005 at 4:18 AM #7
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    Well man, I've had a look and IMO it's not a bad cut. You've started well, now you just need to keep practicing ;) .
     
  8. Jun 30, 2005 at 4:35 AM #8
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    thats pretty good work
     
  9. Jul 1, 2005 at 12:11 AM #9
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    Anyone have any piece of advice for me? :)
     
  10. Jul 1, 2005 at 12:14 AM #10
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    nice render..thanks!!
     
  11. Jul 1, 2005 at 12:19 AM #11
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    pretty good, scratchy though. :)
     
  12. Jul 1, 2005 at 1:05 AM #12
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    How would I make it less scratchy?
     
  13. Jul 1, 2005 at 1:06 AM #13
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    Pretty good for a first but the edges are really harsh and jagged, try smotthing them out more.
     
  14. Jul 1, 2005 at 1:07 AM #14
    OldWolf

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    How do you recomend I do this? Is there a specific tool I should be using, or just rendering the whole thing differently?
     
  15. Jul 1, 2005 at 3:40 AM #15
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    looks pretty cool, and good to use :D
     
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