Bad font ("The One, The Only" part), the grid is way too recognizable, and the border is almost non-existant. 6.3 / 10.
1st: colors look ok, the bg is a little plain. the glow n texts looks ok.7.9/10 2nd: i dislike transformers (is that what it is?), n the bg is getting a little more exiting. text looks allright. 8/10
Interesting style, and the colouring is good. But the blending on the right arm in particular aint great. 6/10.
1st - Like the text, and the render looks cool. Bg fits too. 8/10 2nd - Nice text. Tech works here. 8/10 too
1st = nice render ang bg and I also like the blending 9/10 2nd nice bg and render not that good blending but its ok 8/10
Oh well, other people have said the text is the best part of it, so what just because the grid is recognizable doesn't mean it's a bad thing. And as for the border...who cares it doesn't make it look really worse does it. Anyway loads of other people have loved the Jak sig and you are only 1 opinion, so meh. MajinC: Loving the simplicity mate. 8/10
U probably noticed this already - the beam is at a weird angle. Render could be better blended too 7.5/10